You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
Given are two pie charts illustrating the financial condition of a children's charity in the United States.
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the percentage distribution of revenue from six sources and for three different densities of money. The total money income was slightly greater than the total expenditures, which were 53,561,580 dollars and 53,224,896 dollars
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According to
the first chart, it is noteworthy that donated food occupied the largest proportion, accounting for 86.6%,
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community contributions contributed the most of the rest proportion, for 10.4%.
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, the remaining four sources, which were program revenue, investment income, government grants and others add up to a neglectable 3%. Turning to the information about how that money was spent, apparently, the program services appreciated the largest percentage, accounting for 95.8%. Apart from that, the percentage investment for fundraising and management and general had a similar figure, which was 2.6% and 1.6% respectively, attributing for the remaining spent.
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