The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using soler power

The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using soler power
The given diagram illustrates the way people make
water
to drink
by
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solar power. From an observational perspective, it is apparent that the process is quite complex
which
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commences with
solar
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the solar
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panel
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is
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taken
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sunlight from the sun and culminates with
a
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clear
water
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is
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put in
the
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moveable container
that is
ready for customers. The initial
phrase
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focuses on the solar panels taking sunlight from the sun and
then
transmitting that energy to the converter, the converter will pass that energy to the pump
stayed
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underground. in the next stage, underground
water
will be absorbed
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the
water
tank. The
water
tank is put on a platform made of wood. After that, the
water
will
be followed
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the pipe in the tank to flow to the
water
can
drink's
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pipe and
in
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the side of
pipe
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, there is a tap which people can drink the
water
in
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here or when people close the tap, the
water
will be moved to the moveable container to
delivered
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to customers.
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