The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using soler power

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water

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to drink

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solar power. From an observational perspective, it is apparent that the process is quite complex

which

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it

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commences with

solar

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the solar

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panel

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panels

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is

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apply

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taken

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takes

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sunlight from the sun and culminates with

a

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clear

water

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and is

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is

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apply

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put in

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a

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moveable container

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ready for customers. The initial

phrase

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phase

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focuses on the solar panels taking sunlight from the sun and

then

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transmitting that energy to the converter, the converter will pass that energy to the pump

stayed

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underground. in the next stage, underground

water

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will be absorbed

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the

water

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tank. The

water

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tank is put on a platform made of wood. After that, the

water

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will

be followed

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follow

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the pipe in the tank to flow to the

water

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can

drink's

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drink

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pipe and

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on

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the side of

pipe

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the pipe

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, there is a tap which people can drink the

water

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in

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apply

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here or when people close the tap, the

water

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will be moved to the moveable container to

delivered

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deliver

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to customers.