The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using soler power
The given diagram illustrates the way people make
water
to drink by
solar power. From an observational perspective, it is apparent that the process is quite complex Change preposition
with
which
commences with Correct pronoun usage
it
solar
Add an article
the solar
a solar
panel
Fix the agreement mistake
panels
is
Verb problem
apply
taken
sunlight from the sun and culminates with Wrong verb form
takes
a
clear Remove the article
apply
water
Correct word choice
and is
is
put in Unnecessary verb
apply
the
moveable container Correct article usage
a
that is
ready for customers.
The initial phrase
focuses on the solar panels taking sunlight from the sun and Correct your spelling
phase
then
transmitting that energy to the converter, the converter will pass that energy to the pump stayed
underground. in the next stage, underground Wrong verb form
that stays
water
will be absorbed to
the Change preposition
into
water
tank.
The water
tank is put on a platform made of wood. After that, the water
will be followed
the pipe in the tank to flow to the Wrong verb form
follow
water
can drink's
pipe and Change noun form
drink
in
the side of Change preposition
on
pipe
, there is a tap which people can drink the Add an article
the pipe
water
in
here or when people close the tap, the Change preposition
apply
water
will be moved to the moveable container to delivered
to customers.Change the form of the verb
deliver
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