The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
Presented for consideration is the given line graph pertaining to the number of
visitors
in specific Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017
In general, most of the visitors
experienced an upward pattern throughout the timeframe. In addition
, the total amount of tourists witnessed the highest number in the period of time.
Taking a closer look at the sum of all visitors
which commenced with 1 million
in 2010. During the period of 5 years, the figures tended to rise up to around 3 million
before stabilizing in the next year. In 2017, the total reached its peak at about 3,5 million
.
Turning to the remaining statistics which saw a fluctuation over 7 years. According to
2010, visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
and islands started with just over 0,1 million
and 0,7 million
units respectively. However
, there was a dissimilar trajectory in 2011, guests who were on cruise
ships
indicated an increase to over 0,5 million
while
the others reduced by 0,1 million
visitors
. In the next year, there was a big disparity when visitors
who stayed on the island climbed up to approximately 1,4 million
, the opposite was true for the tourists on cruise
ships
which saw a drop to the old figure in 2010. From 2013 to 2016, visitors
staying on the island saw a downward trend which accounted for over 1 million
whereas
the latter significantly went up to 1,5 million
. At the end
of the timeline, both saw an increase when visitors
on cruise
ships
and islands represented over 2 million
and 1,5 million
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