The diagram below shows how drinking water by solar powdered pomp and filter.

Contained in the diagram is information pertaining to different methods of making drinking

water

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by using solar power.

Overall

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, there are a total of seven steps beginning with the solar panel

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given sunlight in the morning and ending with

water

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being brought in the moveable container. The process begins with a solar panel capturing sunlight in the morning and converting it into electricity which is completed by the converter.

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, the electricity power will be provided for a pump that stays in an underground well and it will move

water

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to the site. After that, the

water

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is pumped into the

water

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tank

that is

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put on the wooden platform. The next step

after

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that in the

water

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tank, the

water

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will go through the filter process to ensure it is suitable for drinking. Gradually, the drinking

water

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is flowed through a tube that connects with the moveable container. The system features a tap directly attached to the tube so people are

being

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convenient when giving some

water

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from the

water

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tank.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.

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People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?

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