The bar CHART below shows the proportions of english men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person househoulds.

The bar CHART below shows the proportions of english men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person househoulds.
The
chart
compares
males
and
females
of different ages in terms of living alone in England in 2011. The pie
chart
gives information about
number
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a number
the number
show examples
of
bedrooms
in these
houses
.
Overall
, the largest
proportion
belonged to 5 or more
bedrooms
houses
and the smallest
proportion
belonged to
2-bedroombedrooms
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2-bedroom bedrooms
households.
While
most single
men
were between 35 and 49
years
old, most alone
women
were over 85
years
old. In a pie
chart
,
2-bedroombedrooms
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2-bedroom bedrooms
houses
had the largest
proportion
, with 35,4%. The indicators of 1 and 3
bedrooms
were relatively similar, at 28% for
1-bedroombedrooms
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1-bedroom bedrooms
houses
and 29,8% for
3-bedroombedrooms
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3-bedroom bedrooms
houses
. 5
bedrooms
houses
had the smallest
proportion
, with 1,4%. The figure for 4
bedrooms
houses
was quite higher than that, at 5,3%. Turning to a bar
chart
, in terms of all ages, the figure for
females
was higher than those for
males
, at 53% for
women
and 47% for
men
. The most alone
women
were over 85
years
old, at 78%. The indicators of
women
who were 75-84, 65-74 and 50-64
years
old were relatively similar, at 72% for 75-84
years
old
women
, 64% for 65-74
years
old
ones
, and 50% for 50-64
years
old
ones
. The least alone
females
were 35-49
years
old, at 35%. The figures for 25-34 and 16-24
years
old
women
were relatively similar, at 38% for 25-34
years
old
females
and 47% for 16-24
years
old
ones
. Regarding
men
, the most alone
males
were 35-49
years
old, at 65%. The least alone
men
were over 85
years
old, at 22%. The figures for 75-84, 65-74 and 50-64
years
old
men
were higher than that, at 28% for 75-84
years
old
males
, 38% for 65-74
years
old
ones
, and 50% for 50-64
years
old
ones
. The indicators of
men
who were 25-34 and 16-24
years
old were almost similar, at 62% for 25-
34-year-oldyears
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34-year-old years
old
men
and 53% for 16-
24-year-oldyears
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24-year-old years
old
ones
.
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