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The bar CHART below shows the proportions of english men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person househoulds.

The bar CHART below shows the proportions of english men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person househoulds.
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The
chart
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 compares
males
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 and
females
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 of different ages in terms of living alone in England in 2011. The pie
chart
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 gives information about
number
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a number
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 of
bedrooms
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 in these
houses
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.
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, the largest
proportion
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 belonged to 5 or more
bedrooms
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houses
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 and the smallest
proportion
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 belonged to
2-bedroombedrooms
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2-bedroom bedrooms
 households.
While
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 most single
men
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 were between 35 and 49
years
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 old, most alone
women
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 were over 85
years
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 old. In a pie
chart
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,
2-bedroombedrooms
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2-bedroom bedrooms
houses
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 had the largest
proportion
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, with 35,4%. The indicators of 1 and 3
bedrooms
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 were relatively similar, at 28% for
1-bedroombedrooms
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1-bedroom bedrooms
houses
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 and 29,8% for
3-bedroombedrooms
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3-bedroom bedrooms
houses
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. 5
bedrooms
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houses
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 had the smallest
proportion
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, with 1,4%. The figure for 4
bedrooms
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houses
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 was quite higher than that, at 5,3%. Turning to a bar
chart
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, in terms of all ages, the figure for
females
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 was higher than those for
males
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, at 53% for
women
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 and 47% for
men
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. The most alone
women
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 were over 85
years
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 old, at 78%. The indicators of
women
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 who were 75-84, 65-74 and 50-64
years
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 old were relatively similar, at 72% for 75-84
years
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 old
women
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, 64% for 65-74
years
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 old
ones
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, and 50% for 50-64
years
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 old
ones
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. The least alone
females
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 were 35-49
years
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 old, at 35%. The figures for 25-34 and 16-24
years
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 old
women
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 were relatively similar, at 38% for 25-34
years
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 old
females
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 and 47% for 16-24
years
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 old
ones
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. Regarding
men
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, the most alone
males
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 were 35-49
years
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 old, at 65%. The least alone
men
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 were over 85
years
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 old, at 22%. The figures for 75-84, 65-74 and 50-64
years
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 old
men
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 were higher than that, at 28% for 75-84
years
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 old
males
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, 38% for 65-74
years
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 old
ones
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, and 50% for 50-64
years
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 old
ones
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. The indicators of
men
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 who were 25-34 and 16-24
years
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 old were almost similar, at 62% for 25-
34-year-oldyears
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34-year-old years
 old
men
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 and 53% for 16-
24-year-oldyears
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24-year-old years
 old
ones
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, males, females, bedrooms, houses, proportion, men, years, women, ones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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