The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia.
The pie chart and table provide data about
visitors
on a particular journey in Australia.
Overview: People who visit Australia come from different regions, such
as Asia, Europe, the US, and others. European tourists spend more of their time
in that place than others.
It's clear that US visitors
hold the largest proportion of visitors
, which represents 37% of the total measurement in Australia. In the second main region are other countries around the world. Asia and European travelers
comprise 18% and 10% of Change the spelling
travellers
this
chart, respectively.In the table, compare their time
and other interests, such
as how many days
for staying
, popular accommodations, and main events. The people who spend the least Change preposition
to stay
time
are Asians, who spend 7 days
of their holidays in 5-star hotels as well as
going sightseeing. In Europe and other regions, visitors
stay at a place where camping and caravaning are also
the main activities related to the sea, for example
, surfing, swimming, and sunbathing. However
, Europeans spend 17 days
, while
other regions spend 10 days
. The last
Americans passed their time
two times more than Asians as they stayed in 5-star hotels, which is also
likely Asian.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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