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The graph below shows UK air pollutants in millions of tonnes, from three different sources, between 1990 and 2005

The graph below shows UK air pollutants in millions of tonnes, from three different sources, between 1990 and 2005
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The line graph illustrates the amount of
air
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 polluted by
Industry
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, Transport and
households
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 over 15-year timescale spanning from 1990 to 2005 Broadly, the popularity of
air
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 pollutants caused by
Industry
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 and
Households
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 registered downward trends,
while
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 that of Transport witnessed completely opposite trends. Notably, the total
air
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 polluted in three different sources saw a sharp decrease during the surveyed period From the outset in 1900, the pollution of
air
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 produced by
Industry
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 accounted for almost 6
million
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tonnes
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, which was nearly 5
million
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tonnes
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 than that of
Households
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. The figure for
Households
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 remained steady in the following 9 years before declining to under roughly 0
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005, whilst the amount of
air
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 created by
Industry
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also
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 saw a dramatic fall to about 2
million
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tonnes
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 in the initial year Commencing from 1900, exactly 1
million
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tonnes
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 of
air
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 pollutants originated from Transport, but it
then
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 fluctuated to approximately 1,2
million
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tonnes
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 in 1999 before rising significantly, with 3
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005

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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, industry, households, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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