The graph below shows UK air pollutants in millions of tonnes, from three different sources, between 1990 and 2005

The graph below shows UK air pollutants in millions of tonnes, from three different sources, between 1990 and 2005
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The line graph illustrates the amount of
air
polluted by
Industry
, Transport and
households
over 15-year timescale spanning from 1990 to 2005 Broadly, the popularity of
air
pollutants caused by
Industry
and
Households
registered downward trends,
while
that of Transport witnessed completely opposite trends. Notably, the total
air
polluted in three different sources saw a sharp decrease during the surveyed period From the outset in 1900, the pollution of
air
produced by
Industry
accounted for almost 6
million
tonnes
, which was nearly 5
million
tonnes
than that of
Households
. The figure for
Households
remained steady in the following 9 years before declining to under roughly 0
million
tonnes
in 2005, whilst the amount of
air
created by
Industry
also
saw a dramatic fall to about 2
million
tonnes
in the initial year Commencing from 1900, exactly 1
million
tonnes
of
air
pollutants originated from Transport, but it
then
fluctuated to approximately 1,2
million
tonnes
in 1999 before rising significantly, with 3
million
tonnes
in 2005
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