The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These two maps present a comparison of the Barmouth
area
prior to and post changes for stopping vehicles from entering the old town in 1936 and 2007. In brief, there were some modifications in the public Use synonyms
facilities
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area
and residential Use synonyms
area
.
Years ago, in 1936, in the middle of the Barmouth Use synonyms
area
, there were some public Use synonyms
facilities
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such
as post offices, sweet shops, butchers, flower shops, banks, and libraries. The roads were built from the north, east, south, and west towards the centre of the town. In the southeast Linking Words
area
, there were Government Offices and Farm Land. Use synonyms
Then
, on the opposite of the road (on the west), there was a cycle path. A lot of trees were planted in the northwest Linking Words
area
. And on the northeast, there was a river.
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While
, in 2007, there was some development in the areas to prevent cars from entering the old town. The public Linking Words
facilities
were changed, the sweet shops and butchers were changed to Supermarkets, Use synonyms
as well as
the flower shop became a travel agent. A shopping centre was built in the middle of the public Linking Words
facilities
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the previous cycle path was set up to roads. The museum and Golf Course were constructed on the previous Government Office and farmland in the southeast Linking Words
area
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the northeast Linking Words
area
had become a housing Use synonyms
area
. Use synonyms
Finally
, in 2007 only a tree was planted in the northwest Linking Words
area
.Use synonyms
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