The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The blueprint illustrates the pertaining to the changes of a central
library
in
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from 20 years ago until the present day. From an observational perspective, it can be seen that all amenities in a
library
have taken place with different infrastructures.
Moreover
, tables and chairs at the centre of the
library
are demolished. Beginning with the left of part of the
library
, on the south-west, the reading
room
which had newspapers and magazines has taken place with the computer
room
. In the top left corner of the blueprint, the
room
which included CDs, videos, computer games and adult fiction
books
in the south of the
library
has been converted into the big
room
which contained 2 huge sofas, storytelling events, children’s fiction
books
and in the southern road with all reference
books
, respectively. Regarding the right half of the central
library
, the location of the children’s
books
room
has transferred into the lecture
room
.
In addition
, on the west, the location of adult non-fiction
books
has undergone a visible transition to include enough amenities
such
as adult fiction
books
, an information desk and a lot of self-service machines.
Furthermore
, the enquiry desk
room
which had tickets, book returns, etc,… has made way for the café in the bottom right of the blueprint.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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