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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
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The blueprint illustrates the pertaining to the changes of a central
library
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from 20 years ago until the present day. From an observational perspective, it can be seen that all amenities in a
library
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 have taken place with different infrastructures.
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, tables and chairs at the centre of the
library
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 are demolished. Beginning with the left of part of the
library
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, on the south-west, the reading
room
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 which had newspapers and magazines has taken place with the computer
room
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. In the top left corner of the blueprint, the
room
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 which included CDs, videos, computer games and adult fiction
books
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 in the south of the
library
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 has been converted into the big
room
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 which contained 2 huge sofas, storytelling events, children’s fiction
books
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 and in the southern road with all reference
books
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, respectively. Regarding the right half of the central
library
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, the location of the children’s
books
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room
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 has transferred into the lecture
room
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.
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, on the west, the location of adult non-fiction
books
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 has undergone a visible transition to include enough amenities
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 as adult fiction
books
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, an information desk and a lot of self-service machines.
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, the enquiry desk
room
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 which had tickets, book returns, etc,… has made way for the café in the bottom right of the blueprint.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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