The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. You should write at least 150 words.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The provided table describes how many individuals from five European
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lived in each other's
countries
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in 2011.
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, Germany had the most foreign
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among these
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most of them were Italian, after that Britain had the most foreigners and the majority of them were Polish and the lowest number of these
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would have preferred to live in Poland.
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the data, Germany had the most foreigners by about 1200000 about 550000 of them were Italian. The total number of foreign
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who lived in Britain was less than foreign
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in Germany by about 1000000 persons in 2011 and 550000 of them were Polish. Turning to other
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, about 860000 foreign
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lived in Spain and approximately 390000 of them were British. The number of foreign
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who lived in Italy and Poland was about 190000 and 6000 persons the majority of them were Polish and German by about 100000 and 4500 numbers, respectively.
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