Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days youngsters are

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serious problems because parents are unable to take

care

of their kids

due to

tough work schedules. I

am completely agree

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with the statement that social problems have their

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from lack of parental

care

and its side effects on

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health of young people. It is well-known that child

care

is very important for minors.

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is the main source for their behaviours which builds

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of

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for the next step. Admittedly, those are

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family

care

most likely to

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as

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incomplete for the rest of

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life

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. Emotional support helps children to maintain healthy

mindset

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and structures main life skills for them.

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, students who are able to reach high scores in their subjects have disciplined family that leads their kids to perform better and motivate them to achieve their goals.

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, mothers and fathers are responsible for

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aggressive

behaviours that build over

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time. Social matters are related

with

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family members that unable to pay attention to their child at the time because they have no time from work. Parents are expected to take action in case of crisis which destroys the ability of

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consciousness

,

also

, they should provide professional aid if needed. If none of these actions

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serious

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,

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of the youngsters and their identity as a human will be in danger.

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, legal prosecution reveals that young adults who

commited

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commit

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crime

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grew up in unsatisfactory

environment

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where they

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the absence of guardians. In conclusion, adults who prioritize work

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their

offsprings

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are responsible for behaviours made by their young kids.

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, it

is tend

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to build irresponsible and

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aggressive

adults

for

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world

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population.

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of the current issues should make everyone to be concerned and prevent any situation with the next generation.