The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of four destinations visited by three
groups
in Canada. Overall
, cinema is the most popular place for both new migrants
born in English-speaking nations and those born in Canada while
new migrants
born in other countries visit the library more often than any other groups
. In contrast
, theatre is the least common choice for all three groups
.
Starting with the popular spots for new migrants
born in English-speaking countries and people born in Canada, cinema accounts for the largest with about 65% and 70% respectively. In addition
, their second favourite spot is the zoo with 50% and just above 40% each. Regarding the rates of libraries, they are slightly lower than them, sharing 40% or less and the lowest proportion of these two groups
of people go to theatre with below 30%.
Turning to the graph for new migrants
born in non-English-speaking countries, the library is the favourite place with approximately 55%, which is followed by the cinema with 50%. Although
a lower percentage of people visit zoos, it is still an attractive place with just above 30%, which is almost three times as much as theatres.Submitted by mizuho on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, migrants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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