Write a letter to your English-speaking friend whom you visited recently. In your letter - Tell him/her how wonderful the experience you had in his country was - Invite him to visit your country - Tell him what you can do for him during his visit.

Dear Jashan, I hope you are doing splendidly. I'm writing
this
letter in regard to expressing gratitude for the hospitality which I received during my
last
visit
in
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Italy. My
overall
experience was memorable, especially in the luxurious City
Milan
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of Milan
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, and the water city
Venice
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of Venice
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.
Furthermore
, I want you to visit my country there are plenty of worth seeing sites in India. As you already know India is a diverse country, and full of rich culture. So I want you to explore my country the same I did yours.
Firstly
we will go to the golden temple Amritsar,
along with
this
I will show you the special bread at the Wagah border.
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last
, a short road trip on
bike
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to Ladakh is highly recommended, so we will do that for sure.
According to
me,
spring
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the spring
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season would be suitable for your trip as it is the festival season
also
. I will sponsor your visit
therefore
you just need to pack your bags. I will manage the rest of the things. Inform me what
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you think about
this
plan
?
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Can't wait to see you, Warm regards, Raj
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logical structure
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logical structure
Consider providing more details and separating your ideas with clear paragraphs to make it easier to follow the plan.
complete response
The letter successfully covers all the required points: expressing gratitude for the visit, inviting the friend, and outlining plans during the visit.
suitable writing tone
The tone is friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • memorable
  • sights
  • cultural attractions
  • natural wonders
  • hospitality
  • tour guide
  • itinerary
  • festivals
  • accommodation
  • travel arrangements
  • local cuisine
  • souvenirs
  • cultural exchange
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