The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the given illustration reveals the changes which have

been

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taken place in a village.

Overall

, if the town

has been

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had

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experienced the transformation, the farmland would have

demolished

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been demolished

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in order

for building

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residential areas.

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, even though the educational institution is almost untouched, the gardens

has

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been replaced by the new

facilily

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facility

for the

olderly

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elderly

. With regards to the western of the primary school, the

removement

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removal

of the farmland not only contributes to the road network expansion but

also

make

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way for

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the constructing

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constructing

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construction

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houses.

Furthermore

while

the only post office remained unchanged, shopping sections nearby it were removed. Turning to the remaining side of the primary school

which

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the gardens are now cut down for

residental

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residential

purpose

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and erecting new places for the old generations.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

126 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban development
residential buildings
commercial buildings
infrastructure
recreational facilities
population growth
living standards
green spaces
environmental concerns
transportation networks
connectivity
accessibility
economic development
land use
agricultural
vacant lots
developed properties
functionality
economic landscape

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