The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart above illustrates the percentage of households and technologies present in the US namely, washing machines, computers, phones, internet, and DVD players from the
year
1995 to the Use synonyms
year
1999.
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Overall
, the washing machine dominated throughout the given period. Linking Words
However
, the phone showed the highest variation among its peers.
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To begin
with, the internet was the lowest among the rest of all starting from 10 per Linking Words
cent
in the Use synonyms
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1995, rose to 19% in the Use synonyms
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1996, increased by 3 per Use synonyms
cent
in the following Use synonyms
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and in 1998 it reached 30 per Use synonyms
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of US market which Use synonyms
finally
ended up by 50 per Linking Words
cent
in the Use synonyms
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1999. Use synonyms
Second,
comes the phone with the highest deviation, which began at 18 % in the Linking Words
year
1995, soared to 20% in the adjacent Use synonyms
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, and levelled up in the following years Use synonyms
finally
reaching 65 per Linking Words
cent
by the end of 1999. The washing machine depicted has discernible trend throughout ranging from 60 per Use synonyms
cent
in the Use synonyms
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1995 to 80 per Use synonyms
cent
in the Use synonyms
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1999 without dropping off in between. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the DVD player and Computer tried to keep up with the trend but the DVD player was affected by a slight drop in the Linking Words
year
1996 by 7 %.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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