The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps depict the changes which have taken place in the central library over twenty years.

Overall

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, it is evident that the main layout remains

untouch

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untouched

, but some facilities have been added. The most outstanding feature is made in the

children

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children's

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section. There used to be computers, games and videos,

and

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but

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now the

room

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has been extended and two

sofa

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sofas

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have been added for storytelling events. The computer

room

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was transferred to the left of the main

enterance

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entrance

and replaced by the former reading

room

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, with a new door

head

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to the

enterance

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entrance

corridor. All

refrence

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reference

books

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were placed in the corridor between these two rooms.

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, the enquiry desk, which was located to the right of the entry, has been converted

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into

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the

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coffee shop. A new information desk has been installed, on the top of the café,

along with

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three

self-sevice

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self-service

machines. The lecture

room

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was situated

instead

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the

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former children’s

books

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room

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In addition

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, the

adults

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adult's

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fiction

books

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section was placed next to the information desk and the

non- fiction

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non-fiction

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books

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were removed. As we can see, the tables and chairs, which were located in the main corridor,

where

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were

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totally removed.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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