The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These two maps industrial
depicts
the Norbiton industrial Change the verb form
depict
area
and planned development in the Use synonyms
future
. It is clear from the maps thatUse synonyms
Correct article usage
the
area
will Use synonyms
convert
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be converted
to
Change preposition
into
housing
Correct article usage
a housing
area
in the Use synonyms
future
.
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According to
what is shown, all factories will Linking Words
destruct
in the planned Verb problem
destroy
future
. In the Use synonyms
future
, addition of street will built across the river with Use synonyms
T-shape
Correct article usage
a T-shape
also
street will Linking Words
construct
in the Southern of Wrong verb form
be constructed
mape
. Correct article usage
the mape
moreover
, many houses will built in Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
diffrent
areas. Correct your spelling
different
Further
, many Linking Words
faclties
will be established Correct your spelling
facilities
to
people living there easily Change preposition
for
sach
as shops, medical Correct your spelling
such
centre
, schools and Fix the agreement mistake
centres
playground
. From these maps, the farmland will replaced from southern to western the Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
area
.
To Use synonyms
sun
up, we could say that Correct your spelling
sum
this
Linking Words
area
will Use synonyms
development
Replace the word
develop
to
be Change preposition
into
living
Correct article usage
a living
area
for many people Use synonyms
instead
of Linking Words
industrial
Correct article usage
an industrial
area
.Use synonyms
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