Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students. Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is

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that

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should take into consideration

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' opinions, which is based on the reason that

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can be more involved in classes and result in

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in efficiency is a complex one. In my point of view,

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it is important to listen

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and make moderate adjustments

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current teaching methods, it is

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necessary to ensure

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are not taking

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by only learning the ones they prefer, but

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understanding

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and making inquiries for opinions in advance can help

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more suitable and efficient education.

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, a questionnaire can be designed to find out what kind of learning style

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prefer, or what kind of topics are more unfamiliar which requires more materials

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for better understanding, and

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, to give some blank spaces for any suggestions that can be helpful. By implementing practices based on the

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gathered earlier,

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can present a better education.

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that over-satisfying the requests from

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can result in

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imbalance in presenting

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comprehensive learning content.

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activities in class can potentially limit the time

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discussing other

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.

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certain aspects of knowledge and practices are excessively performed, other aspects of the contents and

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are less emphasized, or even not neglected. The responsibility of every educator is to ensure

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receive

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with impartiality.

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, I agree with the claim that teachers should be looking into the

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of the

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to perform better educational

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. By integrating the

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,

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can increase the willingness

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to participate and have higher

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which can result in better learning performance.

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, it is

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necessary to draw the line from over-emphasizing

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from

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. Any adjustments should

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for the increase of efficiency or interests, rather than sacrificing other

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content

which is as important as any other ones.

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should strike a balance between these two factors to execute a comprehensive educational strategy.