You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, • apologize for damaging the product/stuff • explain what happened • say how are you going to fix the issue
Hello my friend
I hope you are doing well. I'm so sorry about your
book
which you took the new one.
If you remember I took a book
from you for preparing an exam. Tomorrow I wanted to give back it to you but it was torn by accident. I'm really regret
Change the verb form
I really regret
for
Remove the preposition
apply
this
.
I will explain this
event to you in detail. When I was reading book
, the housephone rang and I went to answer it. Add an article
a book
the book
Then
my sister entered my room for playing
and she accidentally tore it. She is only 3 years old that's why she didn't know what she was doing.
I hope you will try to understand my situation. I don't want to get you down,so I'm going to sort out with problem by bringing a new Change preposition
to play
book
to you. I hope you won't upset
and forgive me .
See you soon
Best wishes
Sarvinoz 😊Add a missing verb
be upset
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greeting and closing
Consider using more formal language, such as 'Dear [Friend's Name],' instead of 'Hello my friend'.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph develops a single main idea more clearly. For instance, focus the second paragraph solely on explaining what happened.
complete response
You have clearly addressed all parts of the prompt, including an apology, an explanation, and a solution.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is appropriately apologetic and friendly.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite