The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003

The two charts illustrate the phenomenon which is the proportion and frequency of going to the cinema by different aged people during

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1995-2003.They

were

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both show

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similar

growing

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and

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with some minor differences.

Frist

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, the percentage of

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visit

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to the cinema grew steadily before 2003, except

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1997-1999,

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smooth

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.

By contrast

, a steady decrease

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recorded in

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2003. The percentage was only 4% higher than

initial

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data. Meanwhile, the

overall

trend of

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number of cinema visits was upward, but there have been periods when the data decreased sharply

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in 1999

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around 4 times. In the meantime, the period starting in 1995, the average number of different age groups experienced some fluctuations, ranging from a low of 8 to a high of 11 by 2003.

Subsequently

, there was a notable drop in the figures for both sets of reasons. Each

aged

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groups

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reached its lowest point in

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period. It was worth

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that the groups under 35

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reached the same number of 10 by 2003. In conclusion,

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there were minor fluctuations, the

overall

information stayed relatively constant throughout several years. Something may

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between 1997

-

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and

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1999.