In many countries, more and more people choose to imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

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is a trend for
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in the modern era. There is an increasing
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around the world
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opting to purchase imported
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instead
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of locally produced
food
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This
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is happening because of the availability and seasonability,
therefore
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action needs to be taken to encourage
consumers
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to buy locally by getting some incentives and
subsides
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. It must be understood that some
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might be
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out of
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it becomes
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necessary action to import these types of
products
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for
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consumption. In
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, the governments want to import these
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in a
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rounds which make a wide range
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products
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, it might help the
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have
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to buy
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overseas
food
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also
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the
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is invalid at that time.
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, some continents use imported
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such
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as cherries or apples which
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at
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some
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seasons
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or right
condition
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growth so
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want
importing
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these kinds of
products
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for the utilization.
However
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, it can be
also
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known that
they
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government try to cheer
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up for the acquisition
in
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local
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by helping hand local farmers to reduce the price of
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. Specifically in some situations, they could have a sale for the local items which
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the
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to buy because of lower prices.
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, it will help the buyers have
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motivation
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local
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rather than
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imported ones. Take some local
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in some countries as an example, they try to excite the
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by some sales to entice them
buy
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it,
also
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help the local farms sell all these
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. To recapitulate, it is a great option in importing commodities which
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buy some
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out of
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and have a variety selection in their dailies.
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, the government should persuade
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to buy local
foods
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by
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excite
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sale
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in
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the local farms.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • allure
  • novelty
  • diversity
  • perception
  • premium
  • globalization
  • cuisines
  • economic factors
  • subsidies
  • tariffs
  • competitive
  • farm-to-table
  • eco-conscious
  • consumption
  • sustainability
  • local economy
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