The table below shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.
The given table below illustrates worldwide mobile phone sales data in 2005 and 2006. We can clearly see that Nokia has been leading the industry as always. BenQ Mobile has been
at the end
of the list.
First of all, other brands had 19.2 per cent
in 2005, but it decreased to 16.2 per cent
in 2006 .
Next
brand Correct article usage
The next
is
always Verb problem
has
lasted
BenQ Mobile. Verb problem
been
L.G
had 6.7 per Correct your spelling
L.G.
cent
marketing share in 2005, but dropped to 6.3 per cent
in 2006. That is
why; Sony Ericsson passed L.G by 1.2 per cent
. Samsung started with 12.7 per cent
in 2005 and end
with 11.8 per Wrong verb form
ended
cent
in 2006. Motorola had 17.7 per cent
in 2005,
and increased to 21.1 per Remove the comma
apply
cent
in 2006.
To sum up
, Nokia had 32.5 per cent
in 2005 and climbed up to 35 per cent
in 2006. Nokia has been bigger than other marketing share in both 2005 and 2006.Submitted by svdnruslu on
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