The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
The bar chart illustrates
the
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information about how many tourists from Japan travelled abroad during the period
of
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1985 and 1995. The line graph displays the percentage of
Japanese
travelers
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visiting Australia during the same period. In general, what stands out from the figures is that
travelling
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of
Japanese
people, including Australia, gained more popularity over the given period. In 1985 the number of
Japanese
citizens travelling overseas stood at more than 4 million.
This
rate highly increased and reached a peak of just 11 million in 1990.
However
, starting from 1990 there was a slight decline
of
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travelling among
the
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Japanese
citizens.
Nevertheless
, the number
then
began to climb to 1995, making up almost 16 million people.
According to
the second graph, the number of tourists visiting Australia constituted 2% in 1985. The percentage saw exponential growth of 3% until 1988.
Then
this
trend went down gradually to about 4 % in 1989. The indicator witnessed a steady climb to just over 6
percent
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in 1993, followed by a slight fall (at 6 %).
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