The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.
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The bar chart provides data on the
age
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bracket of people living in Iceland over 30
years
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from 1990 to 2020.
Overall
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, the graph indicates that
although
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there are variations, individuals aged 25 and below showed a similar pattern in population growth,
while
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those 64+ depict a reverse pattern. Notably, the 25 to 54
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group were the most populated citizens throughout the given
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. Looking specifically at Icelanders 54 and under, the 25 to 54-year-olds experienced a constant rise all through the given period,
initially
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accounting for a little over 30% of inhabitants, to a peak of nearly 50% by 2020.
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, the second leading
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range 0 to 14
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saw a steady but gradual reduction over the
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, starting at about a quarter of people, and
then
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declining to around 18% of residents.
Similarly
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, the 15 to 24
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also
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witnessed a decline from roughly 21% to a significant fall of just under one in ten. The most under-populated
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sets were senior demographic, over three decades, those aged 65 and over managed to marginally surpass the individuals of 55 to 64. In 1990 Iceland had only about 12% 65-year-olds and older,
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their counterparts were at approximately 13%. The 55 to 64
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brackets
then
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dipped continuously over the
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reaching 10%,
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, 65
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and above rose gradually to around 15% in 2010 and levelled off till the end of the year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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