The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of hospital
beds
available for patients in 8 different
countries
while
the table compares government spending and life expectancy in three of those
countries
,
Japan
, the Netherlands and the USA.
Overall
we can see that
although
Japan
spends the least on health care, it has the highest life expectancy and the most
beds
available for its
people
. A closer look at the graph shows that most of the
countries
mentioned only have around 4
beds
available per thousand
people
. There are two exceptions to
this
, Germany, who have twice that number, and
Japan
, whose number is significantly higher, at 14
beds
for every thousand
people
. From the
table
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table,
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we can see that the USA, which has the highest healthcare expenditure of the three
countries
mentioned ($6,719 per person), has a life expectancy of only 78. As mentioned previously,
Japan
spends the least on health care, only $2,581 per person. Despite
this
Japan
’s
people
can expect to live to be 83 years of age, 3 years longer than
people
in the Netherlands, whose government spend $900 more on them. (184 words)
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beds, countries, japan, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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