The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of hospital
beds
available for patients in 8 different countries
while
the table compares government spending and life expectancy in three of those countries
, Japan
, the Netherlands and the USA.
Overall
we can see that although
Japan
spends the least on health care, it has the highest life expectancy and the most beds
available for its people
.
A closer look at the graph shows that most of the countries
mentioned only have around 4 beds
available per thousand people
. There are two exceptions to this
, Germany, who have twice that number, and Japan
, whose number is significantly higher, at 14 beds
for every thousand people
.
From the table
we can see that the USA, which has the highest healthcare expenditure of the three Add a comma
table,
countries
mentioned ($6,719 per person), has a life expectancy of only 78. As mentioned previously, Japan
spends the least on health care, only $2,581 per person. Despite this
Japan
’s people
can expect to live to be 83 years of age, 3 years longer than people
in the Netherlands, whose government spend $900 more on them. (184 words)Submitted by yulyawashington on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beds, countries, japan, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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