The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.

The maps illustrate how a downtown has been changed from 1990 to the present.

Overall

while

the residential facilities have been redeveloped over the timescale, the pedestrian area is included.

Additionally

, it is noteworthy that the commercial zone is upgraded into a central mall in order to be more convenient for the customers. Beginning with the north of the town centre, a row of small shops has been turned into a large shopping mall, which is adjacent to the still-standing childcare centre.

Furthermore

, even though the bank in the Middle East has been demolished to make way for a new café, the other one remains intact in the northwest corner. Moving onto the south part of the town, all the houses have been renovated into modern apartment blocks.

Besides

, there are some new crosswalk signs added surrounding the park, and library

along with

the town hall to allow for providing safety for the people walking on the street.

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