The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.

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The maps illustrate how a downtown has been changed from 1990 to the present.

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the residential facilities have been redeveloped over the timescale, the pedestrian area is included.

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, it is noteworthy that the commercial zone is upgraded into a central mall in order to be more convenient for the customers. Beginning with the north of the town centre, a row of small shops has been turned into a large shopping mall, which is adjacent to the still-standing childcare centre.

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, even though the bank in the Middle East has been demolished to make way for a new café, the other one remains intact in the northwest corner. Moving onto the south part of the town, all the houses have been renovated into modern apartment blocks.

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, there are some new crosswalk signs added surrounding the park, and library

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the town hall to allow for providing safety for the people walking on the street.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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158 words

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The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.

It is important to be concerned about international events, even if those events have no direct impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Older generation often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thoughts and behavior. Most people argue that it is not helpful for younger generations to prepare for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Many young people do not know how to manage their money when graduating from high school.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can be suggested?