The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.
The line graph gives data on the
amount
Change the quantifier
number
show examples
of
people
per
million
visiting four museums from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
, the chart indicates that
while
both the Louvre and Vatican
Museum
exhibited an increment, there are notable variations to the extent, on the one hand, the visits to the London Science
Museum
showed a reverse pattern, and Shenzhen had quite a linear
amount
of
guests
. Looking specifically at the number of visits to the Louvre, which had the highest
amount
of attention. The
museum
began with a little below 8
million
people
, and rose slightly to around 9
million
in 1995, but
then
saw a slight dip to about 8.5
million
people
five years later, from
then
, the
museum
saw a gradual influx of
guests
, reaching a peak of approximately 9.2
million
by the end of the season.
Similarly
, the Vatican
Museum
received nearly 4.3
million
guests
initially
,
then
experienced a steady
amount
of
people
reaching its highest level of about 9
million
people
, coming in a close second to Louvre
guests
. Regarding the visitors of the London Science
Museum
and Shenzhen
Museum
, the London Science
Museum
started with exactly 4,000,000
people
this
figure plateaued for the first five years
then
depleted significantly accounting for half its initial
amount
, and becoming the least centre of attraction.
On the other hand
, Shenzhen was just under 4
million
in 1980,
this
was reduced by about 1
million
in 2000, when it rose back to its initial
amount
.
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