The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010.
The line graph depicts the number of men and women attending the gym from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, both genders experienced fluctuations in gym attendance over the years, with females surpassing males by the end of the period.
Male membership began at just over 2000 individuals in 1980, rising significantly to around 3990 five years later. Linking Words
However
, there was a substantial dip to approximately 1800 between 1995 and 2000, followed by a peak of exactly 5000 members in 2005. Shortly after, it plummeted to about 800 members by the end of the period.
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In contrast
, female gym attendance started lower than males, with just above 1000 members in 1980. Despite fluctuations, females saw continuous growth, reaching a peak of about 2900 between 1985 and 2000, surpassing males during Linking Words
this
period. By 2010, Linking Words
due to
a reduction in male attendance, females became the majority of gym-goers.Linking Words
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