The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar charts
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information about
total
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the total
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percentage
of films released and the film ticket
sales
in both
years
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1996 and 2006. From an
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clearly
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the
highest proportion of
film
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released is in 2006
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rate
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,
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the lowest
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years
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2006 and 1996
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seme rate
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romance
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. And in ticket
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the graphs show the highest
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proportion
2006
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in 2006
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in comedy
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,
also
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year
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in romance ,over
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the
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field
given. Looking at the chart for more
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, in 1996
the
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drama films in released and comedy in 2006 it
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then
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other
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kinds
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of films, in ticket
sales
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the rate could be the same is drama the
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different
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just
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, the
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comedy
company
is more
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popular
in
sales
in both
years
.
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released
it
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more
then
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sales
percentage
in
tow
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two
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years
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, sales, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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