The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.
The diagram compares the significant changes in Nelson
City
between the years 2000 and the present.
Overall
, the principal change to the
city
is the construction of more residential areas and various other business centres
such
as markets, a restaurant, shopping centres, a university, and bars and clubs. As the first map reveals, in 2000, the
city
of Nelson was relatively basic. In the southern area, a university building was situated with trees on its right side,
while
the northern region had a port, with a main road running from the west to the east.
However
, in the eastern part, a train station was located on the northwestern side and opposite it was an old market. Presently, the
city
of Nelson has grown dramatically. The trees have been supplanted by a new shopping centre, and on the left side of the university, a hall of residence has been constructed. Connecting the school to the
city
centre, a train line has been built, with a new train station right beside it. The
city
centre has now become a place for bike rentals.
On the other hand
, new shops have replaced the old market, and opposite the shops is a new covered market. The port area now has a restaurant on the bottom left and an entertainment site on the adjacent right. Notably, the main road has been reformed for pedestrian purposes only.
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