The diagrams show changes in a student common room.

Contained in the two maps is information pertaining to changes which have taken place in a common
room
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of students from five years ago up until the present day.
Overall
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, the common
room
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has undergone a noticeable transformation including more furniture and home facilities.
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, most of the kitchen facilities have remained untouched, except for a bench in the middle-south of the
room
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that has been replaced by a microwave. Beginning with the east part of the
room
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, the
table
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and bookshelf have been removed to make way for new home furniture involving three new armchairs, a drinks machine and a television. Turning to the middle of the
room
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, the two old tables have been replaced by a new smaller
table
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and a bench for laptops.
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in the west, the
table
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has been replaced by another smaller
table
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and a new square-shaped one.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, table with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 5 times.
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