The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and household in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented line graph illustrates the transformation of ownerships of different electrical equipment and how long they
used
for domestic purposes in one particular country from 1920 to 2019.
Add a missing verb
were used
Overall
, it can be seen apparently that all Linking Words
type
of electric appliances experienced an upward trend throughout the period, Fix the agreement mistake
types
whereas
there was a downward trend in the number of Linking Words
hours
doing the Use synonyms
house works
.
Correct your spelling
housework
According to
the period of work, people spent their Linking Words
times
in household activities for 50 Fix the agreement mistake
time
hours
per week in Use synonyms
initial
year, Add an article
the initial
then
the figure decreased significantly Linking Words
more
than Change preposition
by more
a
half to 20 Correct article usage
apply
hours
in Use synonyms
next
four decades. Correct article usage
the next
Subsequently
, the figure continually fell to 10 Linking Words
hours
, in 2019.
Turning to the first graph, a washing machine had 40% of Use synonyms
Add an article
the household
a household
household
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households
which
possessed Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
power tool, in 1920, before the number Linking Words
increasing
continually to 70% forty years later. Afterwards, it dropped slightly to around 65%, Wrong verb form
increased
1980
, Change preposition
in 1980
then
rose to just above 70% in the final year. Meanwhile, there was only 30% for vacuum Linking Words
cleaner
in the beginning, which eventually climbed sharply to a peak and steadily remained over the period. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
Additionally
, Linking Words
refrigerator
had nearly 0% in the first year Add an article
the refrigerator
then
went up dramatically to 90%, in 1960, before rising gradually to 100% and stayed at Linking Words
this
level until the end.Linking Words
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