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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food resturants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food resturants between 2003 and 2013.
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The given bar chart illustrates how often Americans visited
fast
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fast-food
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food
restaurants
 between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, it is evident that the majority of American
individuals
 opted to dine at fast
food
restaurants
 on a weekly or bi-monthly basis,
while
 the percentages of
individuals
 who ate fast
food
 every day or never consumed it were relatively low. Clearly, the proportion of
individuals
 who consumed fast
food
 on a weekly basis varied throughout the 10-year period, with a peak of 33% in 2006. The percentage of
individuals
 who visited fast
food
restaurants
 once or twice a month
also
 fluctuated, reaching a high of 33% in 2013. The figure for going to fast
food
restaurants
 several times a week came
next,
with its highest point of 20% in 2006. Customers dining at fast
food
restaurants
 a few times a year showed a slight increase until 2013 (15%).  It is interesting that the percentages of
individuals
 who visited the establishment on a daily basis and those who never consumed fast
food
 exhibited similar downward trends during the same time frame. In 2013, these percentages decreased to approximately 3% and 4%, respectively.
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