The diagram below shows the lifecycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relavent.

The

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process diagram shows us the life cycle of a variety of

fish

called

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apply

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the

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salmon

fish

.The growth of the

salmon

fish

is shown in 3 different steps.

The first

step

is the

salmon

egg and the

last

step

is the

adult

salmon

. In the first

step

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the

adult

salmon

lays its

eggs

in the beds of

slow moving

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water which approximately takes about 5-6 months to hatch.the

eggs

layed

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laid

by the

adult

salmon

in stored underneath the small stones below the reeds.The little

eggs

hatch and small fishes

comes

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out known as

fry

.The

fry

are

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about 5-8 cm in length.

Then

the

fry

are

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let into fast

flowing

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fast-flowing

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lower river. The

fry

is let to roam in the lower

fast flowing

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fast-flowing

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river for an approximate 4

years

.

Then

in the second

step

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they turn into smolt which is approximately 12-15 cm in length.The smolt travels into the open sea where it grows into an

adult

salmon

in a time span of 5

years

.In the

sea

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seawater

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water

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water,

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the

salmon

grows into a mature

salmon

.The

adult

salmon

can approximately grow

upto

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up to

70 to 76cm.

Thus

,for

a

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egg to grow into

a

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adult

fish

it

approximatey

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approximately

takes

upto

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up to

9 to 10

years

.After growing into an

adult

the

adult

fishes

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fish

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again

lays

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eggs

which

undergoes

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undergo

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all the 9 to 10

years

of journey to turn into an

adult

salmon

..

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