The diagram below shows the lifecycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relavent.

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process diagram shows us the life cycle of a variety of

fish

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called

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the

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salmon

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fish

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.The growth of the

salmon

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fish

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is shown in 3 different steps.

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is the

salmon

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egg and the

last

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is the

adult

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salmon

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. In the first

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the

adult

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salmon

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lays its

eggs

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in the beds of

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water which approximately takes about 5-6 months to hatch.the

eggs

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layed

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laid

by the

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salmon

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in stored underneath the small stones below the reeds.The little

eggs

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hatch and small fishes

comes

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out known as

fry

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.The

fry

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are

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about 5-8 cm in length.

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the

fry

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let into fast

flowing

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fast-flowing

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lower river. The

fry

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is let to roam in the lower

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river for an approximate 4

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.

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in the second

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they turn into smolt which is approximately 12-15 cm in length.The smolt travels into the open sea where it grows into an

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salmon

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in a time span of 5

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.In the

sea

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seawater

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water

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the

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grows into a mature

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.The

adult

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salmon

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can approximately grow

upto

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up to

70 to 76cm.

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,for

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egg to grow into

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adult

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fish

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it

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up to

9 to 10

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.After growing into an

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the

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fishes

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again

lays

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eggs

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which

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all the 9 to 10

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of journey to turn into an

adult

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salmon

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