Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter apologizing for your absence. In your letter: State why you cannot go Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner Suggest another time to meet Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses
Dear Monalisa,
I
hope
you are doing well, I am writing this
latter
to say sorryCorrect your spelling
letter
,
because Remove the comma
apply
i
Change the capitalization
I
cannot
attend Wrong verb form
could not
to
your birthday party Change preposition
apply
last
monday
. Change the capitalization
Monday
First,
happy birthday for
you, I Change preposition
to
hope
you always
healthy and Add a missing verb
are always
keep
beautiful. what about your family? Verb problem
apply
long
Capitalize word
Long
time
not
see, please say hello Correct your spelling
no
for
Change preposition
apply
me
to your parents.
As you know I Correct pronoun usage
apply
am
doing Courses lately at Tesal Institut. because Wrong verb form
have been
i
Change the capitalization
I
want
go to Australia. I have been here 4 months and I just back to my house only once a month. When I heard about Add the particle
want to
you
birthday party I Change the pronoun
your
am
so Wrong verb form
was
Excited
because we never Fix capitalization
excited
meet
each other since I Wrong verb form
met
go
to East Lombok.
Wrong verb form
went
However
, i
Change the capitalization
I
Wrong verb form
wanted
want
send your letter sooner before, but my teacher Add the particle
want to
give
me Change the verb form
gives
a
homework Correct determiner usage
some
anda
we have to finish it. That way I forget to send your letter.
If you have a Correct your spelling
and
time
. i
Change the capitalization
I
want
visit you next Add the particle
want to
monday
. what Change the capitalization
Monday
your
opinion I Add a missing verb
is your
hope
you have time
because i
will give you something. Change the capitalization
I
thanks
you for your Replace the word
thank
time
. I hope
you always
Add a missing verb
are always
Correct your spelling
healthy
healty
, Please send my letter as soon as possible
Sincerely
Nurul HikmahCorrect your spelling
healthy
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grammar
Be careful with grammatical errors and punctuation issues, as they can affect the clarity of your message.
coherence
Try to provide more structured paragraphs, with each one focusing on a single idea to enhance readability.
tone
The tone of the letter is very friendly and suitable for writing to a friend.
task response
You included all the necessary points required in the task, such as reasons for absence and proposing another meeting time.
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