The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Presented for consideration is a diagram illustrating the steps involved in the process of recycling aluminium
cans
.
Overall
, it is a fairly complex process including many stages, commencing with the collection of used
cans
, prior to a number of recycling steps to culminate with the recycled
cans
. Collecting used alumni is the focus of the first
stage
. Specifically, having been put into rubbish bins, these used
cans
are collected by trucks and
then
transported to recycling industries. At
this
point, these are going through a cleaning
stage
initially
, before being sorted, shredded, and
finally
compressed.
This
is followed by a heating step for the resulting items to be melted. The latter steps aim at forming a recycled can. Once the melting
stage
has been completed, the items are
then
solidified and wounded to become a roll whose thickness ranges between 2.5 and 6 millimetres. The final
stage
involves these
cans
being formed and ready for reusing. It is notable that the United Kingdom has added up to 74% of recycled aluminium
cans
.
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