The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Presented for consideration is a diagram illustrating the steps involved in the process of recycling aluminium
cans
.
Overall
, it is a fairly complex process including many stages, commencing with the collection of used cans
, prior to a number of recycling steps to culminate with the recycled cans
.
Collecting used alumni is the focus of the first stage
. Specifically, having been put into rubbish bins, these used cans
are collected by trucks and then
transported to recycling industries. At this
point, these are going through a cleaning stage
initially
, before being sorted, shredded, and finally
compressed. This
is followed by a heating step for the resulting items to be melted.
The latter steps aim at forming a recycled can. Once the melting stage
has been completed, the items are then
solidified and wounded to become a roll whose thickness ranges between 2.5 and 6 millimetres. The final stage
involves these cans
being formed and ready for reusing. It is notable that the United Kingdom has added up to 74% of recycled aluminium cans
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