The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The horizontal bar chart illustrates the amount of spending expenditure on various consumer goods in several developed countries. In general, what stands out from the figure is that people from the United Kingdom spent the most on six items compared to other nations.
On the other hand
, Germany was the least in terms of consuming money. Examining the details it can be seen clearly that, photographic film was the most popular good than others. The British consumers spent 170 on
this
stuff. People from France, Italy and Germany expended 165, 165 and 150, respectively. The second widespread product was toys, for these British citizens spent more money approximately 168, compared to the other Europe countries, which made up just 158 for France and Italy.
However
, Germany spent very low expenditure about 145.
Additionally
, other goods
such
as CDs, perfumes, tennis racquets and personal states were the least popular among consumers. Despite
this
fact, Britain was the leader in terms of spending money on listed items.
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