The table below gives information about the different ways mobile phone owners use their phones in a developing country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table shows the percentages of information about the different ways to use mobile
phone
by the owners in a developing country within a period of 4 years, commencing from 2006.
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phones
Overall
, The highest rate of using mobile phone
can be Fix the agreement mistake
phones
obsereved
for Making calls in 2006 and 2008 Correct your spelling
observed
while
the lowest percentages of using phone
can be seen for Recording Fix the agreement mistake
phones
video
in 2008.
Make calls Fix the agreement mistake
videos
was
recorded 100 in 2006 and 2008 Change the verb form
were
that
was the most popular reason to use Correct pronoun usage
which
this
tool. then
this
figures
decreased by 1 per cent in 2010 to get to 99. the Fix the agreement mistake
figure
least
rate of utilizing Correct word choice
lowest
phone
was recorded for Record video at 9 in 2008 and Fix the agreement mistake
phones
this
number nearly
10 times lower than Make calls in 2008. the rate of using cell Add a missing verb
was nearly
phone
for Paly games was 17 in 2006 Fix the agreement mistake
phones
while
this
amount was a third times lower than in 2008 and 2010. Search the Internet and Record video was not have enough data in 2006 whilest
the percentage of Correct your spelling
while
two
categories was recorded in 2010, 73 and 35, respectively.Correct article usage
the two
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