The table below gives information about the different ways mobile phone owners use their phones in a developing country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the different ways mobile phone owners use their phones in a developing country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table shows the percentages of information about the different ways to use mobile
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phones
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by the owners in a developing country within a period of 4 years, commencing from 2006.
Overall
, The highest rate of using mobile
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can be
obsereved
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observed
for Making calls in 2006 and 2008
while
the lowest percentages of using
phone
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phones
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can be seen for Recording
video
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videos
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in 2008. Make calls
was
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recorded 100 in 2006 and 2008
that
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which
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was the most popular reason to use
this
tool.
then
this
figures
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decreased by 1 per cent in 2010 to get to 99. the
least
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rate of utilizing
phone
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was recorded for Record video at 9 in 2008 and
this
number
nearly
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10 times lower than Make calls in 2008. the rate of using cell
phone
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for Paly games was 17 in 2006
while
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amount was a third times lower than in 2008 and 2010. Search the Internet and Record video was not have enough data in 2006
whilest
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while
the percentage of
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categories was recorded in 2010, 73 and 35, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words phone with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.

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  • frequent
  • activity
  • contrast
  • significantly
  • prevalent
  • speculate
  • trend
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  • implication
  • develop
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