The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph here illustrates
people
traveling
to a Caribbean Change the spelling
travelling
island
as well as
where they stayed in seven
Add a hyphen
seven-year
year
span, from 2010 to 2017. The number
of visitors is counted in millions.
Overall
, the total number
of tourists has increased from 1 million
to 3.5 million
following an upward trend with a sharp rise in the year
in 2017. In case
of their accommodation, it Correct article usage
the case
also
showed an upward trend, however
, their progress was different from 2011 to 2016.
The total number
of travellars
was 1 Correct your spelling
travellers
million
in the year
of
2010, almost 80% of which stayed on the Change preposition
apply
island
. In the following years
the tourists Add a comma
years,
number
increased constantly untill
2016. Correct your spelling
until
On the other hand
, the people
staying on the island
remaind
Correct your spelling
remained
remains
remain
same
in the Correct article usage
the same
year
of
2011. In 2012 and 2013, their Change preposition
apply
number
increased significantly, reaching 1.5 million
which maintained
till 2015. In 2016 there Add a missing verb
was maintained
is
a sudden drop in the Wrong verb form
was
number
of people
staying on the island
, but spiked to 1.5 million
in 2017
Conversely
, around a quarter of a million
people
stayed on cruise ships in 2010, which jumped to half a million
in 2011. But the graph dropped in 2012. From 2012 to 2017 the number
constantly improving
, reaching 2 Wrong verb form
improved
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, island, year, number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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