The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Provided in the pie charts is information that illustrates several parts that people in Japan and Malaysia
spend
money Wrong verb form
spent
for
in 2010.
Change preposition
on
Overall
, it is evident that housing and other goods and services accounted for major
amount in both countries, meanwhile, Add an article
the major
a major
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
transport had small figures.
Change preposition
apply
Begining
with Japan, it can be seen that Correct your spelling
Beginning
Japanese
spend most of the money they Correct article usage
the Japanese
earned
on household stuff, which was 29%. Wrong verb form
earn
Moreover
, health care and other goods and services witnessed nearly the same data of about 20%. By contrast
, the ratio of transport and food were
6% and 14% in order.
Moving onto Malaysia, the proportion of other goods and services was biggest, 34% precisely. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Furthermore
, Malaysian
spent about 26% Replace the word
Malaysians
their
wages on housing and food. Change preposition
of their
On the other hand
, they paid less attention on
transport and health care, Change preposition
to
that
were 3% and 10% respectively.Correct pronoun usage
which
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