You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of two different industries that consisted of UK GDP in five separate
years
. Overall
, it is clear that
both sectors managed to increase their share of contribution, and the IT industry
expanded its advantage against the service industry
.
To begin
, the service sector, which only made up 4% of the total GDP in 1992, maintained slow but stable growth throughout the years
, first reaching 6.5% in 1994, then
peaking at well above 8% in 2000.
On the other hand
, starting at more than 6% in 1992, the contribution made by the computing industry
rose rapidly to beyond 8% only two years
later before dropping to below the figure again in 1996. However
, during the next four years
, the IT sector experienced a strong resurgence that lifted the proportion to 12% in 1998. In 2000, the continuous surge helped the industry
reach roughly 15% of the entire GDP, which was nearly twice the size of the share of the service industry
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