The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportions of two different industries that consisted of UK GDP in five separate
years
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Overall
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it is clear that
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both sectors managed to increase their share of contribution, and the IT
industry
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expanded its advantage against the service
industry
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To begin
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, the service sector, which only made up 4% of the total GDP in 1992, maintained slow but stable growth throughout the
years
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, first reaching 6.5% in 1994,
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peaking at well above 8% in 2000.
On the other hand
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, starting at more than 6% in 1992, the contribution made by the computing
industry
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rose rapidly to beyond 8% only two
years
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later before dropping to below the figure again in 1996.
However
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, during the next four
years
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, the IT sector experienced a strong resurgence that lifted the proportion to 12% in 1998. In 2000, the continuous surge helped the
industry
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reach roughly 15% of the entire GDP, which was nearly twice the size of the share of the service
industry
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