The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares three major air pollutant amounts in China, America, Japan and
Australia
in 2012. The units are given in
PPM
.
Overall
, the most features belong to the transportation system,
while
the least numbers account for electricity production collectively.
in addition
, the rates in
Australia
remained constant
this
year.
According to
Asian countries, Chinese residents suffered four times more than Japanese citizens related to electricity production by 60 and 15
PPM
respectively.
Also
,
this
rate for industrial porpuses was two times greater in China with 80
PPM
and almost 40
PPM
respectively.
finally
, the most hazardous air quality was in China with 210
PPM
and the cleanest climate belongs to
Australia
with roughly 60
PPM
overall
. Turning to the other nations, America fluctuated in digits of pollutants in 2012 nearly 60
PPM
for transportation system and almost the same features for electricity production and industrial facilities.
However
, these numbers in
Australia
remained almost stable at the rate of 20
PPM
over the whole year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, ppm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.

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  • Pollutants
  • Industrialization
  • Regulations
  • Geographical factors
  • Emissions
  • Air quality
  • Carbon dioxide (CO2)
  • Particulate matter (PM)
  • Nitrogen oxides (NOx)
  • Fossil fuels
  • Renewable energy
  • Sustainable practices
  • Comparative analysis
  • Environmental impact
  • Public health
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