The chart below shows the information about changes in average house proces in five different cities between 1990 and 202 compared with the average house price in 1989

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The bar chart clearly illustrates the alteration of the common residence

prices

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in five major

cities

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in the world and there is a comparison with the

prices

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between 1990-1995 and 1996-2002.

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, the housing expenses experienced an increase in 3

cities

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, except for Frankfurt which decreased in the given

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. London had the highest climb in house

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among all given

cities

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with nearly 19% from almost -7% to 12%. The second highest change in New York, the

prices

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were doubled from -5% to 5%.

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, Madrid saw a rise in the given

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however

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, it had a small rise with nearly 3%

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compared to London and New York’s increases. The standard house price in Tokyo

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the second lowest one between 1990 and 1995, and it raised approximately 2.5% in the second time

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, Tokyo’s house charge stayed the lowest amount between 1996 and 2002.

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, only Frankfurt had a drop in the given

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to about %1,

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this

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fall did not make it the

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one in the given

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6-year

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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, cities, period with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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