in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

The population of

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in the world is rising recently as

people

are living longer than before.

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both

positives

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and

negatives impact

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society. But

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essay will contend that on balance the

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of having more elderly

people

outweigh the negatives. that being said

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society has more

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elderly

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, it is because

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nowadays many

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aware

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their

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good diet and

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out.

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lifestyle can be

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to their children so that their

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good health as well. As in Japan, elderly

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still fit and take a social service job in their

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time. It

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also

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reduce

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unemployment, as most of the elderly

people

also

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have already

settle

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in

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so that they can support their families independently. Many ageing population

also

pleasure to

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care of their grandchild, it will help especially for the working

parent

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so they don't have any

ssues

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issues

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their children for work.

on the other hand

, many

people

think that the

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causes

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more problems and expenses in society.

while

it is true that the government cost

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retirement is

being increased

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caused

by

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this

phenomenon,

but

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the main problem might be the abandoned elderly in public social

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. Strengthening law enforcement will carry out

this

problem effectively.

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the

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elderly

eldery

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elderly

give challenges to the government, but the positive impact

having

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elderly

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the elderly

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around is more significant than the drawback