IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8.5

You want to complain about the service you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting. Write a letter to the person who organised the meeting. In your letter • describe the meeting • explain the problems with the service • suggest what the meeting organiser should do.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the poor service provided at 'The Byke' hotel on 04th August.
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 is to inform you that the client meeting was held in the same hotel on 05th August on the 6th floor to discuss the business requirements of our new highway project.
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, there were 5 more employees
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 me who were part of
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 meeting. I am disappointed with the maintenance of amenities and hygiene. The first problem was that the air conditioner was blowing hot air.
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, the bedsheets and towels were unclean which made the matter worse,
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, I tried to call them multiple times at reception. Unfortunately, it was unanswered. I would suggest that you connect with the hotel manager and make sure to provide clean sheets and towels.
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, bring them to notice to ensure that there is someone who answers the calls at the reception. Thank you for taking
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 matter into consideration. Yours sincerely, Kinnari Bodade

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complete response
Provide a bit more detail to describe the overall context of the experience, such as the duration of your stay.
suitable writing tone
Ensure the tone remains formal throughout. Although mostly consistent, double-check for any language that might appear too informal.
logical structure
The structure of the letter is well-organized, with each paragraph focusing on a single idea, contributing to the overall clarity.
greeting and closing
Proper use of greeting and closing, making the letter appear polite and respectful.
single idea per paragraph
Logical progression of ideas, from describing the meeting to explaining the problems, and finally, suggesting solutions.
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