The graph below provides information on the nuber of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.

The graph below provides information on the nuber of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.
The given line graph illustrates the number of
students
from the US, UK and Australia who studied abroad within a
period
of 6 years, commencing from 2002. The highest rate of studying overseas can be observed for the US in 2007 and more
students
in the US
was
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significantly greater than that of
other
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the other
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two categories. At the beginning of the
period
, the number of
Students
from the US was recorded at 50000 in 2002,
this
figure decreased slowly within 2 years to get to around 45000. in 2007,
this
category
to finish
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, it was at the beginning of the
period
.
moreover
, Australian
students
were the lowest one during the
period
than the other categories and kept the same trend over the
period
around 10000, from 2002 to 2007. in 2002, The UK
students
were recorded at 30000
then
this
number kept the same trend for a year
then
a moderate reduction to get to well over 20000
at the end
of the
period
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • comparison
  • notable
  • peaks
  • drops
  • pattern
  • outlier
  • data
  • potential reasons
  • increase
  • decrease
  • speculate
  • long-term trends
  • provided information
  • analyze
  • overall
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