The system used for rubbish or garbage collection in your local area is nowt working properly. It is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

email regarding some problems we have faced with rubbish collection in our area. As you might be aware, the collection time used to be 8 at night;

however

, one week ago, we were informed that it would be transferred to 12 at midnight from the 1st of July. A point

that is

worth considering is that a significant percentage of people in our area, including me, are employees.

This

means that everyone sleeps before midnight and,

therefore

, will not be able to put out the litter at the due time.

This

can cause serious sanitary issues for lots of residents. You are requested to revise the decision and change the time to its previous one.

According to

our group consultation, 7 p.m. or the latest 10 p.m.

also

can be dedicated to collecting the garbage. We are looking forward to getting your reply, Faithfully yours, Maria Sobhani

Submitted by mojgan.sobhani on Sat Jun 08 2024

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task achievement

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coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which contributes to its overall coherence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

collection system
irregular garbage collection
missed collections
inadequate bins
operating hours
negative impact
bad odor
increased rodent activity
unsightly streets
health risks
accumulation of waste
increase frequency
better scheduling
stricter monitoring
community awareness programs

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