The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980

The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980
The map gives information on how Liverton areas have witnessed some changes so far from 1980
Overall
, it is clear from the diagram that all of the warehouses were diminished and recreational places have been constructed,
whereas
the locations of cranes have been situated sailing club and hotel.
Moreover
, it is
also
worth mentioning that the coast has stayed without shifts. Looking at the details, in the locations of two warehouses above the river , a kid`s playground and education centre have been built till now and in the place of the
last
warehouse , residential areas have been situated.
Instead
of all the cranes, sailing clubs and flood barriers,
as well as
hotel
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been built until now.
On the other hand
, the ship museum has been built since many ships were demolished ,
while
the coast has been stable since 1980.
Finally
, in the river, a bridge has been placed in order to connect both sides.
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