The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980

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The map gives information on how Liverton areas have witnessed some changes so far from 1980

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, it is clear from the diagram that all of the warehouses were diminished and recreational places have been constructed,

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the locations of cranes have been situated sailing club and hotel.

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, it is

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worth mentioning that the coast has stayed without shifts. Looking at the details, in the locations of two warehouses above the river , a kid`s playground and education centre have been built till now and in the place of the

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warehouse , residential areas have been situated.

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of all the cranes, sailing clubs and flood barriers,

as well as

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hotel

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been built until now.

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, the ship museum has been built since many ships were demolished ,

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the coast has been stable since 1980.

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, in the river, a bridge has been placed in order to connect both sides.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

158 words

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The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980

In the past, people stored knowledge in the book. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people think that the education system should focus on teaching students practical skills that are needed for employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house

Some people believe that educating people about the natural world is the most effective way to protect the environment. Other say there are more effective ways to protect the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.