Task 1 : The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1 :

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the annual income
by
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of
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the
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apply
show examples
households
in the US in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
, the most noticeable fact
that
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is that
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after 8 years the
household
which
get
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gets
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more than $100.000 every year
become
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has
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the highest rate over the
others
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other
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households
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households'
household's
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revenue. In 2007,
households
which got less than $25.000 and $25.000 - $49.000 showing
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a slightly
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slightly
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slight
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rate, counted at about 25
millions
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million
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. Even though showed an
increase
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increasing
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number
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in number
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in 2011 at about 30
millions
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million
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, both of the
households
experienced
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a slightly
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slightly
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slight
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decrease after 4 years counted at about 28
millions
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million
show examples
. Turning to the other annual revenue,
household
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households
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which got $50.000-$74.999 and $75.000-$99.000
showing
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showed
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relative
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relatively
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stable over 8 years,
while
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a household
show examples
household
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households
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with $75.000-$99.999 yearly income
seen
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were seen
show examples
as the lowest number over
the
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apply
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time.
In contrast
,
revenue
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the revenue
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of
household
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households
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in
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with
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$ 100.000 or more showed
a
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apply
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positive progress and became
highest
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the highest
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proportion
at the end
of the period counted nearly
doubled
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doubling
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at
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to
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30
millions
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million
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, though showed a small decline in 2011.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, household, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • households
  • income distribution
  • peak
  • rise
  • fall
  • stable
  • significant
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
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