Task 1 : The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the annual income
by
Change preposition
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
households
in the US in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Use synonyms
Overall
, the most noticeable fact Linking Words
that
after 8 years the Add a missing verb
is that
household
which Use synonyms
get
more than $100.000 every year Change the verb form
gets
become
the highest rate over the Verb problem
has
others
Correct quantifier usage
other
Use synonyms
households
revenue.
In 2007, Change noun form
households'
household's
households
which got less than $25.000 and $25.000 - $49.000 showing Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly
rate, counted at about 25 Change the word
slight
Use synonyms
millions
. Even though showed an Change to singular
million
increase
Change the verb form
increasing
number
in 2011 at about 30 Change preposition
in number
Use synonyms
millions
, both of the Change to singular
million
households
experienced Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly
decrease after 4 years counted at about 28 Change the word
slight
Use synonyms
millions
.
Turning to the other annual revenue, Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
household
which got $50.000-$74.999 and $75.000-$99.000 Fix the agreement mistake
households
showing
Wrong verb form
showed
relative
stable over 8 years, Change the word
relatively
while
Linking Words
Use synonyms
Add an article
a household
household
with $75.000-$99.999 yearly income Fix the agreement mistake
households
seen
as the lowest number over Add a missing verb
were seen
the
time. Correct article usage
apply
In contrast
, Linking Words
revenue
of Add an article
the revenue
Use synonyms
household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
in
$ 100.000 or more showed Change preposition
with
a
positive progress and became Remove the article
apply
highest
proportion Change the article
the highest
at the end
of the period counted nearly Linking Words
doubled
Wrong verb form
doubling
at
30 Change preposition
to
Use synonyms
millions
, though showed a small decline in 2011.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, household, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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