The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map compares how
region
looked like in the past and Add an article
the region
nowdays
.
Correct the word
nowadays
Overall
, the maps depict two zone
in the lift picture Change to a plural noun
zones
was
in the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
years
1986 and Fix the agreement mistake
year
on the other hand
was in the persent
. We can see one of Most Correct your spelling
present
change
that remove Fix the agreement mistake
changes
a huge gardens
in the past to make houses Correct the article-noun agreement
a huge garden
huge gardens
in addition
retirement
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to retirement
home
. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
Moreover
there Add a comma
Moreover,
are
a lot Wrong verb form
were
og
cows in 1986 Correct your spelling
of
while
in the present were removed.
Now Turing
back to details , in the north maps there is Verb problem
Turning
bridge
and Add an article
a bridge
the bridge
stil
the same places when Correct your spelling
still
see
under Verb problem
apply
bridge
in the past there is farmland it that replacement to add houses .
In the past in the Add an article
a bridge
the bridge
middle
there Add a comma
middle,
are
Wrong verb form
were
shop
and post Fix the agreement mistake
shops
office
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offices
however
in the Correct your spelling
present
persent
the shops cut down to Add a comma
persent,
introducing
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introduce
to
residential. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, in 1986 in
the south Change preposition
on
map
there Add a comma
map,
are
farmland Change the verb form
is
while
in the persent
has Correct your spelling
present
bee
built accommodation.
On the other Correct your spelling
been
had
, in both Correct your spelling
hand
maps
there is river stoke and unchanged. Add a comma
maps,
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addition
the build of Add a comma
addition,
post
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the post
a post
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offices
office
is stable Fix the agreement mistake
offices
the
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apply
place
.Fix the agreement mistake
places
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